It hurts to see you cry
when all I want to do
Is know the reasons why
and dry the tears for you
It hurts to say goodbye
when all I want to do
Is tell the ways that I
have fell in love with you
It hurts to hear your name
when you are not around
Though you're not to blame
for who my heart has found
It hurts that you're not free
to feel my loving touch
And you could give to me
your love I need so much
It hurts to know forever
will not be spent with you
It hurts to know i'll never
have my dream come true
A contest entry
- My Secret Wicked Crush...PW and More Points, as Promised... by JinSays.
900 points, ended February 14, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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it hurts to love, and it hurts not to love. you've expressed that very well in this poem. so gracefully done with so much emotion.
keep up the great work -
Wow i loved it so sweet, and i know your pain i have been there before thank you for entering and good luck!
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TY very much
Silver is great and it gave me a chance to write.Have a great day -
exactly...
this actually stirred somethings up for me...i understand completely. -
This is very very sad. I think everyone has felt like this at one time or another...though, I have to say, it's not quite what I was looking for. I'm looking for more for what the feelings of a secret crush make you feel...does that make sense? In other words, what happened when you first met this person? Who made the first move? Did you find yourself spending every single moment of your life in agony, only because you wanted them?..or something like that. What kind of silly things did you do in order to get their attention...?
It doesn't have to be recent..or the person you're with now. Let me know if I can help you,
Jin
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A miserable sense of yearning...
this is exactly what i was looking for. this poem captivates the miserable sense of yearning that comes with such situations. thank you for the entry.
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This situation really pulls at my heart and prevents me from total happiness.
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