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Imprisoning Nonsense

Deep in your eyes is the only sight I want to see
Lost in your voice is the only place I want to be

In your arms is the only time I feel right
And God your smile is a beautiful sight

Bound by practical nature and reason
As I rise into a new season

I pack my emotions and chart a new course
With future predictions full of remorse

Author notes

This is about the girl of my dreams. I wrote this to myself in a text message across the room for her. That is how genuine this is

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  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    Even the background is suitable and very sweet. A love poem in a text message... that is highly romantic. I don't know what else to say. This poem is lovely in its format and description... It's beautiful.
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