Baby in the raising of the glass,
I knew it, would never
last,
In the tasting
of the wine
some other place
some other time,
it was never you
it was down to me,
Face the facts
Why can't you see.
You are good enough
for me
too good maybe.
Baby
we try
I wish you could see
that you are
good enough
for me.
Author notes
opton1... friendship
A contest entry
- Adult Valentine Memoirs for Fantasy World Group & AP by ennovy.
950 points, ended February 3, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful thoughts of friendship. Best of luck to you, and thanks so much for entering our contest.
Brazos -
this poem has a wonderful beat,
"Baby in the raising of the glass,
I knew it, would never
last,"..I get a sense it is of the surety of feelings for each other here, and not that the relationship won't last.
some people you have to convince of your love, that they think they don't deserve you.. but I think this is a good thing, because we should always show each other and prove this every day...that you do belong together..sigh..this one really makes me think about relationships, a great poem
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These feelings can be so confusing and hard to sort out. Sometimes it's hard to set up a relationship of equals and you have expressed that well.
Nice write.
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this is butiful
... best of luck to you in the contest... xxx cheeky xxx
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I love the take on friendship, so many mates start out lovers then its only friends in the end...thank for entering...novy
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