It's that time again.
Lovers are walking down the street.
Hands entwined.
Girls giggling at the guys.
Guys acting macho to impress girls.
Last year, you were here.
Valentine's Day.
We spent it together.
If I remember...
I gave you a stupid card,
One that said I'll never leave.
You gave me a card that said,
I'll love you forever.
Ha! It's ironic, really.
You can't be here.
As much as we both want you too.
It's unfortunate.
I'm spending Valentine's remembering you.
Your smile.
Your Kiss.
Your Love.
All of it.
So if you come back...
Just know,
You can find me in my room.
Staring at your picture.
Dreaming of you.
And waiting for you...
To come home,
And be my Valentine.
Author notes
This really come from my heart, everyone. Just thought I'd say that.
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THank you for entering my contest! i really enjoyed this piece. all the best for you in this situation. Good Luck
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Sweetly and truly said, good Poet.
I hope you have a reason to be glad on Valentine's Day. I think I shall write a poem about it. 
Thank you for the inspiration! 
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I'm taking it that this is a prewrite???
Either way it's pretty good. It has a nice flow to it.
There are a few grammar errors.
"So, if you come back
Just know,
You can find me in my room
Staring at your picture,
Dreaming of you,
And waiting for you
To come home
And be my valentine. -
LOVE the way you wrote this. Usually, people write V-day poems either very sappy or very depressing. This is perfect. Especially the ending. It's casual and cool, and I like the way you described everything.
Thanks for entering your write at A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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This is a unique open Valentine that is honest and undeniably sincere. Thank you for your entry.
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great
and its beautifully written. I hope that everything works out for you. I know how it feels, trust me.
best of luck!
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OMG
I love it, it think it might be one of ur best ever!!!
But maybe you should put Your kiss. Your love instead.
Love it. Love you.
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Joey, you need to get less depressed. We all miss her, if not more, at least as much as you, so it will all be okay. She'll be back soon anyway.
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