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God Bless The USA

the season begins with a closing ceremony
to recognize the loss of human morality
a change of pace would just be
another day without money

newspapers with blurred print
find their ways to lose retrieve ink
the stories headline another tragedy
a soldier dead by another anamoly

places that we go
are not the ones that we know
lost in time
i'm not in line
the polls are out
people in doubt

"it's a big change"
they said, confidently.


the blue flags wave happily.
confetti dances from the ceilings.
it's another 'happy' ending.
they war and havoc will finally be over.





& soon they'll find out;
after they've popped the champagne bottles-

there's been a mistake...
these votes are a fake.

Author notes

just angry. venting my feelings. i lost my rhythm right after the 2nd stanza..i apologize for that.

no more bs, please.!!!!!!

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  • Kelli Marie
    January 20, 2008

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    I am not sure what you are angry at. I can see being angry at the whole system and their BS...they all make me sick with their pretentious crap. I can't see anything changing anything. What's going to happen is going to happen no matter who is in the White House. However, forgive me; I don't think a woman needs to try and take that seat. My opinion...that's all.
    A very nice rant, and I say....rant on.
    Kelli