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listen

listen
for once
close your mouth
and listen
amaze me with your silence
consume my words for thought
as the delicacy they are
I love you

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  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    This poem really caught me... in full capture, might I add. Even the first word : "listen". Makes the read really stop and READ. "Amaze me with your silence" : makes the reader speechless.... I am speechless for the most part.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    thanks so much for entering such a lovely entry in the contest...


    al


  • BehindTheShadow
    February 3, 2008
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    LOVE IT

    You have done an amazing job with so little words...thanks for sharing.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 22, 2008
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    good good job!

    loved it...will say no more..
    just loved it!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen/ Seattle.


  • Cat
    January 21, 2008

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    amaze me with your silence... LOL.. that's a great line- so many times you want to have a line like that in just the right situation...


    m

  • wendymolly
    January 20, 2008
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    imagery to feel!

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