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Departure



I remember that night
Foresaw the wreck, but said no goodbyes
Frantic, near sleep

Calm doesn’t come before death

I closed my eyes.

I hoped.



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  • FallOutBoyluvr01
    February 28, 2008

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    well written

    I like your poems they are deep and in a few lines your able to paint such a vivd picture. Good Job!


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    thanks so much for this lovely entry in the contest...


    al

  • wendymolly
    January 20, 2008
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    very dramatic, well devised!