Cleaning out the garage,
what a boring thing to do!
A contest entry
- Got ten more words? by Naridill.
390 points, ended January 20, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of this poem? What can I do better?
Comments
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I agree, you should see mine... no actually no you shouldn't LOL... maybe you can expand some more it is soooo short, but good start though
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Oops! I see it's in a contest for 10 words only
my mistake. Excellent
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Great start! I think this is original, you could expand upon the idea a little perhaps. Maybe you will find lots of memories as you clean out junk, maybe you could find something you love and lost track of years ago and thought it was lost forever! You've got a solid base here, my suggestion would be to add a little more.
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Simple yet worded so fluently. Love the direction you took - something different.
Thanks for entering,
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