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Over Rehearsed



Peeling skin back
from over tired bone,
  deliberate movements
  lost their perfect meanings.

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13 words

A contest entry

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  • Tattboyspet
    January 21, 2008

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    one can only try so much and then it gets too much doesn't it?
    lovely 13 words - congrats on the bronze


  • Never Fall in Love
    January 20, 2008

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    ouch
    the peeling skin back image is quite hurtful!
    But oh so beautiful

    Congrats
    Never ♥


  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Ohhh~ nicely prompted. Definitely stark and sweet.
    Over-rehearsed and under-dressed

    Thanks for entering,


  • February Moon gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    This poem is my new lover.