masked,hidden,
princess of dreams,
lonely,hollow,
low self esteem's,
reality's lost screams
Author notes
short but simple
A contest entry
- Got Thirteen more Words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think? love you all
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ooo nice and dark
beattifully writen and butiful picture to ilistrate it,
XkX -
well done
another mask poem
Mylee -
Awesome
I am absolutely stunned to the core of my living being that you did not place in this contest. I really love how you penned this poem & really love the great words you used for this cotnest & created this entry for the contest. any ways excellent useage of wording & quite ebautifully written too. any ways good work all round and it sucks u did not place but you deserve recogniztion for this poem. 3 clappys from me you get sweetems 
<3 Paul
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nice
short but to the point thats one thing i still cant do with my poetry this is really good
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great work,
i love it for its shortness, the way it speaks..
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i love all of the emotion in this poem. it is short, and simple, but so well written. you conveyed emotions very well while using just a few words. i also love the truth behind this poem. i think the pic goes very nicely with the poem also.
xxundeadxtearsxx
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I think we all have masks
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Once again, love, I am stunned by your words
short but yet so very emotional
it is brilliant, my dear
with love and never ending devotion
Zarok
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Good. In so few words it is very nice rhyme. ^^
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Simple rhyme scheme, very stunning, shows off the imagery perfectly and creates a nice beauty around this piece.
Thanks for entering,
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a beautiful write babe and it contains deep and powerful emotions in it.i can relate to the low self esteem hehe. hope your ok
always here for you. love you <333
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