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Count the birds.
  The mask of the moon
is known,
      not to fingers.

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  • Jornada
    January 28, 2008

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    Congratulations on your win! Your word choices, given you had only thirteen, are powerful: "Count, birds, mask, moon, known, fingers, not." Those are words which evoke a strong response in many people.


  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Love this ~ simple but stark. Your words plant beautiful images into my mind and really sticks nicely. Well done.

    Thanks for entering,