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[ I wish ]

I wish
I had done ballet
with those hippos
from fantasia.
They're cool.

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  • Umi Juvariel silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    I know someone who has worked with those hippos down in Disney world, lol. Anyway, I like this piece a lot. It is short, to the point, and very very silly. It brings out that smile that has lain dormant upon my face for years. Very good work.


  • Kelli Marie
    January 20, 2008

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    lol...how fun this is. Too cute. I love when I am surprise by someones write. Very nicely done. Good luck.
    Kelli


  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Hehe~ very cute and simple but stunning. I love the idea you ran with, different but beautiful.

    Thanks for entering,