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[ Avast! ]

Avast!
Let loose sails
and let them ripple...
ocean waves.

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another ten-worder

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Beautiful~! Simple but worded with a calm breeze, very fluent. Loved the direction you went.

    Thanks for entering,