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Broken Heart


































violin strings broken

                              snapped

                                          cut

my beautuful melody sadly bleeds





























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  • Janie5
    March 9, 2008
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    This is written well.


  • Candy6
    March 8, 2008
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    Well done!


  • Melodies
    January 26, 2008

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    OH!! You have done something wonderful here that I admire... sigh... and wish I could do. A few words can be arranged beautifully if you have inspiration and talent... and you have both.


  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Nawr ~ what a gorgeous last line - so beautiful, so enthralling and simply stunning.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 20, 2008

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    Oh my, but this is excellent! You go, girl!
    You took a few words and made them into a powerful message!
    Excellent!
    All the best to you!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    wow sis this is such an emotional and powerful write and i love the emotion that dwells in this such a creative piece. best of luck

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