Twinkled beauty
of stars
dripping moonlit dreams.
Hide darling,
you can't even
compare.
Twinkled beauty
of stars
dripping moonlit dreams.
Hide darling,
you can't even
compare.
Author notes
Picture Inspiration.
Word Count: 13 words.
purpurina = glitter
In a list
Now you tell me:
Comments
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Reminded me of the Phantom of the Opera.
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fucking hate the background
but your poem
is wonderful.
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Perhaps I decide to leave the background just to annoy the hell out of you.
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EEEEEEEEER...
Star struck? from a thread, moon struck? from a thread could that be you hiding? no threads!...ian.
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One of your best,
pure beauty.
Oh Yeah and I am proud of you LoL !!!
loveandblessings2u & yours always
love ya,
Granny
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beautiful
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excellent
Oh this is good..........really good! I love the message being sent in this poem. You have done a great job conveying it with so few words.
Good luck in the contest!
Ethereal One 
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hey, this is really nice. I love the end.
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thank you
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OH this is beautiful, and I love that border. Many people I see with great borders, backgrounds and grapics. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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Love this - its simple - it's honest and it's brevity at its best. You should enter more
Thanks for entering,
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