No face to talk to me
about something more
than just a dream
A contest entry
- Got Thirteen more Words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely worded - very intriguing, the words flow together nicely and reflect a simple yet stunning piece.
Thanks for entering,
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Nicely done. You leave me with both and eerie feeling and comfort. I think you did a good job. Best of luck to you.
Kelli



