Love

and bruises land like
butterfly wings on
already decomposing eyes

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10 Words

Got ten more words? by Naridill. 390 points, ended January 20, 2008, 13 entries
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Tattboyspet
January 21, 2008

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sigh ... blah, blah, blah, blah ...
LOVED IT!!!
lol! challenge: give me something that I WON'T love!
- Exodus
  January 21, 2008
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  You're on
- - Tattboyspet
    January 21, 2008
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    cool! 20 words that make sense and something that I won't enjoy ... give it to me baby!!!!!!
Naridill
January 20, 2008

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I always loved a poem that starts with 'and' just lifts the piece straight up from the word go - beautifully portrayed.

Thanks for entering,
Ali - Pie
January 20, 2008
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beautiful poem.
truly clever.
xxRainbowDawnxx
January 20, 2008
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This was magnificently written, so very expressive.