Ice and sleet write
on the window in
capital letters:
winter.
Spring douses
us with crocus.
Summer heats
and Autumn cools
our so fevered brows.
In a list
A contest entry
- twenty five by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a wonderfully entry, thanks...
al -
a lovely, concise take on the seasons.. just beautiful
m
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It's winter here, so I loved the first two lines. A very good seasonal write.
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pretty good...
though... what's the theme? -
Seasonal poems with such vivid expression always intrigue me... and this one is flawless. It carries a lot of vivid imagry in so few words
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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an amazing wenty five words which capture depth within them and capture thereader to read on. well done best of luck
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I Love This! So Seasonal... and with all the right touches!
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