sing Your SONG
over me
speak the words in rhythm
with Your heart...
to mine
may Your sound sprinkle these earthly ears
with heavenly....
...melodies
In a list
A contest entry
- twenty five by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this the format is interesting I'm not quite sure if all the chopping and changing in italics and capitals work though it some what takes away from the meaning behind it...sometimes less is more. But ya good poem
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Wow, whether it is someone singing love songs to us, or the one in heaven singing to us..He does as you know! This is so ethereal, and divine! I just think I am touching heaven when I read some of your works. God given inspiration for sure....SING OVER ME! WOW~!
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yes we all have a song that the Lord sings over us! isn't that awesome??
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Nice
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WONDERFUL AND BEAUTIFUL WRITING HERE. SHORT SWEET AND SO PROFOUND. IT IS JUST STUNNING!!!
YOUR WORDS HIT HOME LIKE CRYSTAL RAINDROPS
MUCH LOVE TO YOU
WAYNE LEON
xx
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oh wow thank you Wayne!I'm so honored that you like this one. I am humbled sir!
Silverbutterfly
(Mary)
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thank you Al
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thanks for entering...
al -
I Like This Poem
Wow to hear the melodies of another ones poem. You did a great job. I love the imagery and flow here in your poem. I also like the way in which you wrote it. Thank you for sharing.
Many blessings my dear friend
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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I really like this.
Very much.
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be still my heart!
oh dear...
sing your song...over me...
WHAT A BREATHTAKING LINE!!!
and the way your escalted the font UP...
BRILLIANT!!! LOL!!
you are simply a wonder to behold pretty lady!!!
I love this write...
twenty five words of pure music to my ears...and heart!
as always...you leave your reader with a happy sigh...
visiting your words is always a joy...
Love, Tammy
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oh wow I am thrilled that you liked this one Tammy... I really thought this one might be a little to dull...but you have encouraged me once more girl!!
you are just incredibly kind and sweet!
Mary
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I like the imagery! Interesting idea...25 words.
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YOu could add a guitar to that
and have a really fun catchey song!
And I love your butterfly...it reminds me of hope!
Keep the hope alive!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))) you have a strong voice of hope!
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it was hard to take this piece seriously with the butterfly having a stroke in the corner.. it's actually a really nice piece and i wonder have you considered dumping the little guy so that people like me, prone to epileptic fits aren't bothered and can enjoy such lovely lines as
sing your song over me...
i love that line
m
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Very good write.
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A very gentle entry, I like it.
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Aww... so sweet, this melody of love. There's a lot of emotion packed into these few words, very well said
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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oh Catz you are very kind to me! this is a humbling comment coming from a true poet as yourself. thank you dear friend
*rose
SilverButterfly
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Wow, this caught me by surprise, great warmth of the human spirit can certainly be found here!
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