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longing

and

i've longed to dance again.

and

i've longed to love again.

and

i've longed for you again.

and

yet you've turned away again.

and

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    unusual and definitely 25 words, thanks you for entering...


    al

  • Rowan gold member
    January 21, 2008
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    and? lol.
    Left me hanging for sure.
    Love and longing, done nicely.


  • butterflywriter
    January 20, 2008
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    nice


  • catz Moderators member
    January 20, 2008

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    I like this simple poem of love and longing. It covers what we can go through in our relationships, especially the lost ones.
    good job

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee

  • wendymolly
    January 20, 2008

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    I think the way you have open ended this is fitting!
    It symbolizes a relationship that will always be there through thick and through thin. nice thoughts, all of them very complimentary.


  • acoustical
    January 20, 2008
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    yessss.

    thank you for this one, girlie.it's fair, & got a nice flow.

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