promised me
massive waves this morning
yet i'm on land.
Author notes
I was supposed to go swimming with my friends this morning, but they didn't give me a ride.
ass. i knew i didn't have any friends. okay, done being emo now, thanks.
A contest entry
- Got ten words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 20, 2008, 13 entries
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oh. Well I dont even get invited anywhere...so maybe you're better off than i am? I think i like just chillin...it would suck getting let down =[.
Waves! Holyyy where do you live!
Snowww everywhere here.
But yeah I really like this, its tiny and I like the use of massive. Dont see it too often =P.
And the title is awesome. Its just basically pretty sweet. But yeah =[ your friends are mean.
xoxo
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i'll be emu with you. my friends usually do the same thing.. all the time :/
i still like the simplicty of this; and yet its detatched.
♥
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Nawr ~ i love the simply imagery and how even though a personal write - could be taken in many directions. Nicely done.
Thanks for entering,
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