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Seeing Colors

Riding in the car
Eyes closed gently
Watching the colors pass me by 

A contest entry

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Nicely penned - very fluent and profound - the simplicity is stunning however.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Kelli Marie
    January 20, 2008

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    Many colors pass by, but I always see more red. How about you? Best of luck to you in the contest. Nice write.
    Kelli