Even in loneliness,
someone waves his hands
between my hairs
Author notes
Although didn't say much, but the 'someone hand' is mysterious, if it is Lord's blessings, or the hand of a loving mother, or a slap of the fast wind...
A contest entry
- Got ten words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 20, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love this ~ its beautiful, its clasped between such hurt and such beautiful strength in oneself. Love it.
Thanks for entering,
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Thanks for your words...and especially for the Gold, it has been a long time since I won a Gold...it feels nice...
Thank You.
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