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Pawn

A blind pawn, I
moved here
to there
by thick
fingers of lust.

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  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Strong intro and outro - I feel the middle - a little wordy but wow~ gripping message.

    Thanks for entering,


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    powerful and intriguing words and i love the inspiration of this. a porvoking piece best of luck mommy wolfie