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Silence


When battlefields go silent after an amusement,
Graveyards go crazy, mad and impatient.

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  • checkmate
    January 22, 2008

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    wow. captures so much in two lines. powerful at it's best! your lines are captivating, and blunt. love the metaphors and personifications.

    awesome job!

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Ouch ~ truth in words, very blunt and very gripping. This piece has a strong grip within it.

    Thanks for entering,