Waving
as you
slink away,
cowardly
thief of
my heart.
In a list
A contest entry
- Got ten words? by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 20, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow~! Beautiful, enriched in love and emotions - you really put this in such care and tender but also within fear. nicely penned.
Thanks for entering,
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beautiful ten words which hold alot of power within them and reall create the image of a theif well done mommy wolfie




