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Lanterns

Eyes reflect

candle flames;

as fingers run

from dripping wax.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The burnt child dreads the fire.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    That was wow.
    Congrats on the Gold!


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    January 20, 2008

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    Fantastic gold...
    A very eerie quick write..
    I cant think of a child being burned!
    worst nightmare honestly for me..
    Peace and many blessings
    ~A~


  • Exodus gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    HAHA
    Told you so
    (I couldn't resist )


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 20, 2008
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    Congrats on the gold!!!


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 20, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the prompt chosen. Very well spoken in my opinion. Great depth in such few words!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    Great take on prompt


  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    What a tampering ten words. Very fluent and fantastical [ that's actually a word too]

    Thanks for entering,


  • Exodus gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    WTF are you talking about?
    This is eyegasm level poetry.

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