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Totem

I used to dance
with wild badgers
in fleeting snow

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For the contest "Got Ten Words" in which you must write a poem in ten words. I like the fact that this doesn't seem to have a point, but it really does :-)

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    I honestly like the complete randomness of this - its beautiful - its pointless but looking further into this, its quite extraordinary.

    Thanks for entering,