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Snapshot

i.
  whisper thin lines
    told life.


ii.
  eyeless faces breathe.


iii.
  heads turned to
        embalming fluid.

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A contest entry

Honesty would be lovely

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  • Tattboyspet
    January 21, 2008

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    hmmmm ... okay, not sure about this one (whew! there IS one that I'm not sure about!!!!)
    lol - sorry


    • Exodus gold member
      January 21, 2008

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      To be honest I wasn't sure about this one either.
      The word limit was a bit small for this kind of format but I couldn't make it work any other way.


  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    iii. Is just

    Whack - and bam bitch goes down.

    a.k.a loved it

    Thanks for entering,


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 20, 2008
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    brilliant ... love tthe way its done ... x cheeky x


  • layla.
    January 20, 2008

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    omg!!! this is fantastic. very cool idea. ummmm.... what were you just saying to me??? you are too modest, woman! this is just NICE!

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