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To My Love

I have not got
Thirteen words
to describe the way
I feel you

Author notes

For the contest "Got Thirteen Words" for which you need to write a poem that is thirteen words long. I kinda like it.

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  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Dunno ~ seems a little empty, the word choice is good and idea is good but not much through it.

    Thanks for entering,