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Smother

eternity swallowed
  fragile endings

'til asphyxia inhaled -

  shattering social pretences

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10 words

A contest entry

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  • Tattboyspet
    January 21, 2008

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    I'm starting to sound like a stuck record aren't I? ~worried~
    What more can I say to enhance your writes though?
    I think perhaps I should just stop trying because all my words seem rather superflous ~shaking head~


  • Naridill
    January 20, 2008

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    Deep & dark - almost scary, sometimes your thoughts are the things they where the wild things grow
    But crappy title - haha.

    Thanks for entering,


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 20, 2008

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    Wow. You speak so much in so few words... This is a very intense piece. Excellent wording!!!

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