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The Sweetest Moment

Watching you sat combing your hair through eyes half closed

Barely breathing as I see you make each graceful stroke

Each little flick of your head, captured in my gaze

The sweetest way to wake from sleep, that’s no joke

 

Memories flickering to delicious moments we shared

Just the night before, you and I, before we slept

Touches of tenderness and passion by the light of the moon

Flashes of kisses, taken and given, before we both wept

 

No tears of sadness, sheer pleasure and desire they were

Blinkered lovers, each moment building to something better

Love burning inside and out, we were driven by lust

A hunger for satisfaction making us wetter

 

Then the sweetest of all moments, as we passed that point

The room spinning as that explosion, like a shot from a gun

Hit us both in union, for that moment we are one being

As we fly in raging desire, is that our love done?

 

Shivering together from the pleasure of our night

Shuddering heart beats, is it possible we can rest find

After such heights of dizzy love making sleep?

Not yet, tender our love holding together regaining the mind

 

Another sweet moment of our love as together we talk

Nothing sweetest nothings, one calming the other, taking time

Our love is more than sex, its caring and sharing

The passion matched by tenderness, our love, yours and mine

 

I watch over you as you drift to your slumber

A sweet moment as a smile of contentment appears there

Your beauty enhanced, my heart pounds even harder

Nothing will part us, I love you with passion and care

 

Now awake I watch you, though you think I am asleep

Your essence still with me as I spy each tiny thing

Hair, clothes, a touch of make up, ready to face the day

Can’t hide your love me, I see it in your everything

 

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  • Tattboyspet
    January 21, 2008

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    It is SO true! lol - i actually asked my Master yesterday what He thinks when He just stares at me like that (while i'm drying my hair, while i'm lying next to Him, while i'm just watching tv) and He said that He doesn't really think while looking at me often, He just watches me and enjoys looking ...
    well done on this one - enjoyed it!


    • Corvus Corone
      January 21, 2008
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      Its more like an aura I guess if that makes sense... simple things say so much when you are in love.


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 20, 2008

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    wooowwww this is awsome Jems M'Lady
    xxx Your cheeky lil monkey xxx