Give me the weapons,
with which to slay my demons,
for I must go forth in
confidence, not in fear.
Help me to strike my
adversities to the ground,
to be strong within my
weakness, and be not afraid.
Grant me the courage to let
my enemies live, though they
have failed me, and help me
to bleed through their veins.
Give me a heart of gold,
and let me show mercy to my
rivals, so that, though hurt,
I may spare their lives.
Guide the souls of my foes, so
that they may see their wrongs,
for I hold the very key, to
their most tragic undoings.
Let me show them pity, for I hold
the key to their deepest fears,
the deadliest weapon, to kill them,
with their own wicked hearts.
Author notes
Immortal Obscurity
Quote-inspired:
"Bless my blade,for I have a Demon to face. Bless my heart: Let me be brave, evil will be hard. Bless my enemy, for I hold Death's Key."
"With the venomous kiss you gave me, I'm killing loneliness."
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- With the venomous kiss you gave me... I'm killing loneliness by Temptation..
525 points, ended February 19, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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thanks for your comment it ment alot I really love the
Divide and Conquer it sounds like somthing
in a fanisty book did not spell that right but that is really good very unique
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this is so amazingly perfect for the prompt. you did a great job.
Let me show them pity, for I hold
the key to their deepest fears,
the deadliest weapon, to kill them,
with their own wicked hearts.
last stanza is the best part of the poem.
good job thanks for entering. please put the contest name in your author notes. -
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Done!
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lol. i meant the quote that i used for the contest titile
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Whoops, my bad! Done
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ok quote
"Bless my blade
For I have a Demon to face
Bless my heart
let me be brave, evil will be hard
Bless my enemy
for I hold Death's Key"
have fun and good luck.
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