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Stuck in a Bottle

Trapped between clear walls
Listening with no opinion
A door but no escape
Watching lives change within glass
Never dying
But never truly living
A life of solitude
Love doesn't come between these walls
It stays inside smothering a broken heart

Author notes

my name as you can see for all writing accounts is stuckinabottle
come to think of if i never really thought about my name i just kinda made it up!

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  • greatperhaps
    January 27, 2008

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    hmmmmm. I always thought that your username was emotion based.... interesting insight!!! Like it and good luck in the contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    You have an interesting name, very creative, just like your poem. Very well penned. Good luck in the contest