Bare and naked right here, I stand in your view
Openness is a gift I have brought for you
My Body ... no cover does it hide beneath
My Mind ... no dark secrets inside its sheath
My Heart ... no other dwells in its chambers so neat
My Soul ... awaiting your entry, to make it complete
Author notes
Naked ...
A contest entry
- naked by le soir.
675 points, ended March 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the simplicity of this,it says everything,and the flow is really good ,best wishes
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Beautifully written, baring your feelings can sometimes be so hard, as some people aren't ready for the power of naked emotion. A great take on the prompt, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Bravo
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