Stamped upon our lives
is the blueprint of tomorrow,
captured in the form
of our hopes and dreams:
progeny.
©2008 rous
1-20-08
Author notes
Written for the contest: picture prompt # 5 by Lavender Butterfly
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2386909
A contest entry
- picture prompt # 5 by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
Comments
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nice
nice short write . . liked "is the blueprint of tomorrow" and "progeny" . . congrats on the trophy as well . .
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Thank you for the kind comment. I suppose it is the only form of immortality.
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Very well put, this interpretation of yours of the picture served to inspire the writers in this contest. Nice bronze winner you have penned here.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much.
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This is just simply divine and so meaningful... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Thank you for the inspiration. I added you just so I would not miss any of your contests.
You are one of the few fair contest holders I have come across and the reason I enter so few contests.
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Fantastic
It fits the time of the day/night almost half past one to read this and let the words wander around in my head.
Fantastic done dear friend
greetings Herman
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Thank you, sir. And, it has been long since I have heard from you. I hope all is well.
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you, very much.
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this speaks with minimal words yet it brings to mind a larger picture of life...and I love the word progeny...I like this one
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Thank you. Welcome praise, coming from you. Now I shall hie to check out yours.
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