Oh my love
when I pronounce by lower case letters
and you enunciate by the monograms
your splendor colors your vowels
transcribing the serenade
over the face of your naked leather
luring me to comprehend
and to annotate it warmheartedly
as the scholarship of adoring you
is an astounding act of my lifetime attainment
Oh my love...
Author notes
Prompt..
I mage...http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c350/srmcwilliams/sensual.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Love by a-face-in-the-crowd.
450 points, ended February 7, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful-Profound...
Purified mellifluous wording to compose a sublime masterpiece and paint its images with the colors of the rainbow of creativity... "my lifetime attainment ..." has been poetized for the enchantment of the hearts that pump wonders.
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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AMAZING PIECE
How do you pull it off, leaving me in awe with the beauty of your words. you are life inspiring dear friend. A loving warm hearted piece. Amazing
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Thank for praising my poetry ..I am humbled again..
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Very unique & beautiful. I enjoyed it a lot. Great write! {:
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... to find such 'meeting'...
Wonderful!
Sol
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
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this is really poetic... beautiful imagery and interesting, thoughtful word choice. though i wouldnt have felt intensity from it if not for the "oh my love" parts, but they did it for me! great write, thanks heaps for entering!
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this is wonderful
your words were so well chosen
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Lovely write...
mystery
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Wow
This truly beautiful, and so original and unique. I absolutely adore this poem, the lexis is just so perfect, and the imagery is fantastic.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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WORTHY OF THE TROPHY. YOU HAVE A STYLE NO BODY CAN COPY
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Oh I love the choice of words for this piece. Very abstract but beautiful. I loved the picture you accompany with your write on this one too. This is very unique, enjoyable though!
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Warmheartedly...the only really emotive adjective placed here and yet the sensuous adoration is felt powerfully in the entire text. Beautiful loving write. Very best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Oh this is so beautiful my friend such amazingly beautiful words
Good luck with the contest
Cindy
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OH WOW...this could skip a heartbeat or two! very sensual write! beautiful, and tender in expression! best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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