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Me Without You

Cold.
Alone.
Forgotten.
Misplaced.
Broken.
Fallen.
Lost.
Scared.
Me without you.

Author notes

Well, it was written to the guy i like. I felt lost and confused so it came out like this. Short and expressive in my opinion.

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  • Lunacatz
    January 21, 2008

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    striking to the mind

    very strong words that seem to catch the idea of the persons true inner feelings. no hideing here excellent job well done.


  • DeathlyAngel
    January 20, 2008
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    Short and simple. Nice job. Good luck