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Magic of the Stars

The stars
Stars are beautifully shining
Shining brightly down
Down on my face of joy
Joy of a beauty
Beauty unknown
Unknown tales and stories
Stories of far away places
Places among the stars
Stars that hold wonders
Wonders unimaginable
Unimaginable even for the most creative
Creative worlds of lore and music
Music from the sky
Sky full of stars.

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I really like how I wrote this.

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  • DAMSELx
    January 21, 2008

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    Oh wow, I love the style of this poem! This is very creative and unique.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!