You look at me and smile
I wonder if your thinking of last night
You enter the room, I’m reading
Laying beside me your breasts brush my back
It starts
My breath quickens just barely
I try to fight the yearning; you know I’m fighting
Your hand plays along my side, not yet touching skin
You pull my shirt up enough to touch
Like a drug it hits my blood
Like alcohol it numbs my brain
And then I’m lost in my addiction for you
Book, cloths, mind, gone
With each touch of skin
I want more
You kiss me and I go insane
I need all you can give
I drink white wine from between you legs
We lay entwined in one another
Exhausted and in love
Then I wake form this dream
Wondering if and when
I can truly be addicted to you
A contest entry
- ღ In Search of New Favourites! ღ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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Comments
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wow. I really loved reading this. it's very heartfelt. Very good. You expressed your emotions so very well in this! People don't think it's possible to be addicted to another person, but it is... I know from experience. I wish you the best of luck in the contest! keep up your amazing work!!!!
Crimson -
Truly sad, I felt something whilst reading this, it made me want to cry... love the way it started off as an erotic love poem and then became an erotic dream/wish/sad poem, very emotive.
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