Ink droplets
Fall in plain pale paper
Majesty in words abided
By life recreated by spirit
Fallen straight lines
Nonsense at first
But then forming linings
Of ruptured imaginations
Inadaptable, moving,
Unrestricted and concise
But with so much meaning,
With so much life
Finding answers in a deeper trace,
A strand of one’s mind rests to unwind
Blemishes of what was once nothing
Is now something more than anything
Author notes
written: January 11, 2008
about the magick of ink falling into trance... creating poetry in a piece of paper.
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Brilliant Mind I love the word play
Finding answers in a deeper trace,
A strand of one’s mind rests to unwind
Blemishes of what was once nothing
Is now something more than anything
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....what was once nothing,is now something more than anything..very true ...and beautiful poem..reconstructing everything with words filled with life for people to drown and get lost...
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ooh, this was an enjoyable read ta for sharing
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I liked this a poem in a poem this was creative I liked the idea great job.
the last lines summed up the truth about poetry
Blemishes of what was once nothing
Is now something more than anything
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Very Nice!
I really love rhyme but the flow of poetry that moves from the screen to my mind with ease is intoxicating. And so it is with your poem. My mind absorbed it immediately! I don't like to have to reread a poem to understand it, only to savor it again!
Keep on penning!
Regards,
jennifer
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I love this. There are so few poems about the beauty of poetry, you captured it perfectly! Love it!
~lae
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excellent!
loved this! happy I found this piece!
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Loved this poem! It's been a while since I read a poem about poetry. This really does say what poetry is all about, which is something all of us poets know and understand.
"But with so much meaning
With so much life"
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oooooooo, i really liked "blemishes of what was once nothing; is now something more than anything" Great l ine! actually, I love the whole stanza!!! Great write, i really enjoyed the read
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i love this. it does sum up the whole body of poetry. to one person the words of another may hold little to no meaning but to the writer there lies a deep meaning.
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Your vocabulary is excellent, so now I'm jealous (just kidding )! This piece was just excellent! Great work!
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i love your choice for words! they were amazing, and maybe confusing, but still really awesome. the imagery was just as amazing too.
Fallen straight lines
Nonsense at first
But then forming linings
Of ruptured imaginations
this was my favorite stanza... i think the most imagery was shown here.
Blemishes of what was once nothing
Is now something more than anything
this line is what really caught my eye in this poem as well... its really good. good job!
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it's about how we start to write a poem, where it comes from, how everything will come to be the poem that is writen across pale plain paper (or the poem that's posted here on AP)... thanks for your comment.
-Blanche
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wow this is amazing. Its very deep and wonderful written. Its amazing how you can describe in such a wonderful way. Great write! Keep writing! =)
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Ink droplets
Fall in plain pale paper
Majesty in words abided
By life recreated by spirit
Fallen straight lines
Nonsense at first
But then forming linings
Of ruptured imaginations
Inadaptable, moving,
Unrestricted and concise
But with so much meaning,
With so much life
i really loved this
the ending is sad
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a good piece of poetry, it starts off free then slowly moves into a rhyming poem. good alliteration at the beginning.
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