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Music - My First Love

I have always loved music
And I always will
For musical talent like mine
Some people would kill

I am a freak of music
Because of what I play
My teacher called me a freak
Because its oboe I play

I also play piano
Saxophone and guitar
But there is one thing greater
Than all of these by far

The gift of song has been given
And given generously
Just to sing anything
To know that this gift was for me

I'm starting a band up
With a few of my friends
We want to become famous
Even if a few rules we bend

I started my singing career
When I was in grade one
I had a solo in the music concert
And boy, did I have fun!

That is when I knew,
I'll love music for all time
But these amazing talents
I'll have them always, they are mine!

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  • November-Dani
    February 8, 2008
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    haha music freak. We love our must, dont we darls. THis is a great way of saying how much music means to you. Keep up the awsome work. Love you heaps and heaps! seee u at schooly.

    love love
    dan dan dan dan dan DANI


  • November-Dani
    January 25, 2008

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    Go music!! Yay we are gonna get famous! Haha. Love this, it realy shows you love it. Keep up the awsom stuffy! Love you!
    dani
    lemon bubbles


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    A fab poem, smooth flow and great rhyme. You sound a lot like my son, who played his first festival last year. I wish all the luck for your future...go for it! Oh and good luck in the contest to!


  • im only half empty
    January 20, 2008

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    That's a cute little poem you have there. I myself play a few insturments: sax, clarinet, piano, and viola. I've been singing since age of three. So...I share the love for music

  • Nighttime angel
    January 20, 2008

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    I really like this poem that you wrote. I love how the words flow nicely and I really love the rhyme scheme.

    good luck in the contest

    kat

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