I will love you forever
And I will hold you
in my heart 'till
the end of time
My life will cease
without you by my side
My breath will catch
within my chest in your absence
Please don't leave me
I know you love me
and are trying to protect me
But please my Love, don't go
A hole begins to form
Burning me away at the edges
My soul slowly
withering in pain
I will love you forever
And I will hold you
in my heart 'till
the end of time
My Love,
I cannot live
without you here
in my arms
Come back to me
so I can breath
Come back to me
for my heart's gone cold
The warmth you once gave
has filled with the frost of emptiness
My life is nothing
without you here
I know you love me
And trust me
it does me more harm
with you gone away
I will love you forever
And I will hold you
in my heart 'till
the end of time
My Love, without you
I will surly die
Without me you will too
Our love cannot be broken
Our hearts are one
Beating in sync
The space between us
near its end
You cannot stay away any longer
for my life is in danger
I know you can feel it too
And I know you're coming back for me
The pain, the hole
they no longer ache and burn
My heart has thawed and I can breath
Your warmth and love has revived my soul
Our love is forever
And we will hold each other
in our hearts 'till
the end of time
Author notes
Poem inspired by Lacuna Coil - Entwined
and the love of Bella and Edward of the books Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse.
A contest entry
- Music Inspired by Improv Machinery.
300 points, ended March 7, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do not get on my case about this, I will simply report you.
Comments
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I absoutly loved the ending. AND I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE.
The Twilight series
And I think you did a very nice job of defining that too in a very beautiful way.
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Thank you ^^. Yes... *sigh* The Twilight series... I'm rereading the released series... Can't wait till fall. That's when heaven is released, in my opinion. Ha ha. Thanks for your comment
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it is so great t osee you writing again. i love reading your work. i was listening to the song while i read this and i can really see where you got the inspiration. if i wrote to this song im pretty sure something similar would come out. great write hun. its good to see you back at it with you pen. never stop writing.
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Aww, thanks. I know I say this all the time, but, it still surprises me that you can tell my writing. Lol. I hope to keep writing. Seems like I've gotten a refill ink cartridge or something.
Anyway, hope you get a lot of good poetry in the contest.
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