Clenched so tightly in your hand
Your wrist begins to bleed
Lying down upon the sand
Your mind now feels at ease
The knife is pulled up to your neck
More red begins to flow
Before you finish off your death
I'd thought that you should know--
You are the sunshine of my life
The air in each breath I take
So please, Dear, put away that knife
For my heart's begun to break
I love you more than words can say
More than light loves the sun in the sky
I'll love you after my hair turns grey
Because you're not just another guy
You are my life, my world, my heart
You are my everything
I didn't tell you from the start
But for your love I'd do anything
Every time I've seen you frown
My heart has broken in two
So you can only imagine me now
I swear I'll die without you
I wish I had told you this before
I was just too shy, you see
It seemed to me you needed nothing more
That you were perfect without me
But now you feel you have no love
And feel that you must die
But, Honey, you are my white dove
You're the apple of my eye
Now that you know there's someone here
Who loves you more than life
I hope that you will make a veer
And drop that blood-soaked knife
A contest entry
- What ever comes from the heart by oldphotosonlybringt.
360 points, ended January 26, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [Flash] .Give me love. [Flash] by PrettyxoxPoison.
1200 points, ended June 15, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think
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Dayuumm =)
This is fantastic
Favorite Part:
Now that you know there's someone here
Who loves you more than life
I hope that you will make a veer
And drop that blood-soaked knife
This was really good
Thanks for entering
Good Luck
♥[Katee]♥ -
Woah that was a rollercoaster ride....It was a great poem actually one of the best....the guy must be extra special, and that is amazing. It only takes once to make it and twice to end it... But this is a very sweet love poem in its own way...
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you deserve the trophy it's great I hope someone can say these words to me
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Oh my freaking gosh..!!!!
this was amazing i loved it so much it was as if you were going to let him go through with it at first but then once you told him you loved and cared for him so much that idk it was a great teist i think i love this poem so much you my dear have done an amazing job on it you should be so proud great poet thats a fact.! -
oh wow your flow and rhyme are beautiful.
i loved it. i just didnt like the title.
too... bulky.
but the poem... super. thanks for the read.
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