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You...

You & me
The thought sends chills
Through my body
The very thought of you
Gives me butterflies
And leaves me feeling lightheaded
You have reserected a part of me
That had died deep inside
You have made my heart beat again
And brought my soul out of the dark
Every falling tear
Has been kissed away
& you my savior…
Are left with salty lips
Gentle, soft lips
That glisten with my tears
& your eyes
So dark a blue
They see right through me
I can hide nothing
& it is as I look into those eyes
Those deep seas of rumbling emotions
That I realize I feel
In a way I haven’t in a long time
I realize with my heart soaring
That I love you

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i'll get something up tomorrow night =]
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  • Condemd RyeZing
    February 14, 2008

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    It's nice. A sort of cliche love poem, but that's what love is I think. Good write. thanks for entering.


  • DeathlyAngel
    January 20, 2008
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    Very sweet. Great job. Good luck