from chambers of my womb
my hands cradle the soul of my love
with heaven’s eyes
this fragile figure of myself
is an angel
Author notes
picture inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2386/909.jpg?1200805697
A contest entry
- picture prompt # 5 by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful words to go with this lovely picture served to inspire writers for this contest. A lovely golden trophy to add to your collection too - congratulations.
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Succinct, but powerful. Not everyone can pull off these short poems. I do think, though, that a few articles would benefit this.
"from the chambers..." or even "from chambers in..." I know it seems such a small word, but it does help with the flow. The rest is nicely penned.
Well wishes in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.
rous
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OHhhh Malllly this is so beautiful with words, I took a peek at the picture and the whole thing left me in awe beautiful and wonderful..
Big hugz.
Tearz
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This is just beautiful.
Gaylene
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You just made me cry ~ how powerful and meaningful this is... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Lavie...one could read so much into the beauty of this picture you presented...that alone could bring tears of splender to ones eyes...
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