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Tender

Little velvet-skinned miracle
brings a wild beating to the heart.
Look into eyes that are new -
what wonders will they behold.
There is magic in each babe.

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  • figure of speech
    January 20, 2008
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    Velvet-skinned miracle. What a great description of a baby!


  • Malabu
    January 20, 2008

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    what beauty could be more to us all...than to hold in our hands this tiny creation to melt our hearts...and then we wonder--


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    How very true these sentiment you share with us in these lines. What a wonderful picture that serves to inspire us to write five lines of poetry.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 19, 2008
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    this is very beautifully written and i ove the tenderness in each word. well done and best of luck


  • penman gold member
    January 19, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    This is just sincerely beautiful... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

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