Little velvet-skinned miracle
brings a wild beating to the heart.
Look into eyes that are new -
what wonders will they behold.
There is magic in each babe.
In a list
A contest entry
- picture prompt # 5 by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Velvet-skinned miracle. What a great description of a baby!
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what beauty could be more to us all...than to hold in our hands this tiny creation to melt our hearts...and then we wonder--


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How very true these sentiment you share with us in these lines. What a wonderful picture that serves to inspire us to write five lines of poetry.


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this is very beautifully written and i ove the tenderness in each word. well done and best of luck


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Excellent
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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This is just sincerely beautiful... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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