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Lovely Kitty

I see you
A picture of you
On the pet shop window
I want you
If I could I would
You're a dream come true
If I can take you

A cuddly
Cute
Addorable

Orange white striped kitten

 

I want to

Play with you

Walk with you

Watch you

Follow you

And care for you

 

But only if I could have you

I only see you through a window and picture

I want you to be mine!

Lovely Kitty

 

 

Author notes

I want a kitten. I can't get one because I have A baby sister.

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  • hugs and kissies
    February 11, 2008
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    Kisscute


  • musik-freek
    February 6, 2008
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    Aww cute. I have a cat, shes black and white tho. Very good writing.
    I want to

    Play with you

    Walk with you

    Watch you

    Follow you

    And care for you

    this was my favourite bit. It shows that you know what you want and what you would do with it. Keep writing!


  • TokyoMewMewIchigo
    January 28, 2008

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    Kitty pretty kitty if that kitty came to my house I would ask my dad because I'm going to get a kitty of my own.Great entery!I love it! It is a awsome like the poem.You can read my poem Love my dead dog and alot others.Have a great time if you do read my poems the only one that nobody can read is Dark because dad made me click it because he scared me at his house.So the poem is great.Hope I read more from you the poem is great as for a 9 year old.Wish I could have the cat too.

    -HinataChibiChan I LOVE THE POEM!!!!!


  • any1
    January 24, 2008

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    aww. I can picture a little boy or girl looking in the pet shop window, wishing and dreaming. Nice write. thank you for entering


  • omg-its-sara
    January 21, 2008
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    This was good!I have a cat, and I am very glad I do, so good luck getting a cat!!


  • Candy6
    January 20, 2008
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    Good poem. I have 2 cats named Maggie and Smokey. I love them so dearly.

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