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[ a half-filled glass ]

a half-filled glass
left on the counter,
traces of her lipstick~
deep silence of the house
when she is gone

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tanka

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  • micol
    January 19, 2008

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    Well done. Elliptical, evocative, allusive, and touchbing--as such poems should be. Much said without saying it; much shown in a single image.


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 19, 2008

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    love this Tanka! speaks volumes, and the imagery is fantastic! best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha