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Pick Up the Pieces

Hearts can be shattered
Lives can be ruined
When no one is there to pick up the pieces
Hearts are frozen in fragmented time

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option 4: Heart Break

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  • Nephlim
    January 29, 2008

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    This is a really true poem, and it was good without too much detail. kinda impersonal it seemed, but at the same time like a quote, and I love quotes
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • greatperhaps
    January 27, 2008
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    interesting. short but to the point. I think it is very true. Good luck in the contest!


  • DeathlyAngel
    January 19, 2008

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    That is so true, hearts CAN be shattered. I didn't think it was possaible until my ex broke up with me for good last feburay. Great job. Good luck